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Lucius’ Wiley: Naming Characters
It was Juliet Capulet (via our friend [enemy to some] Billy Shakespeare) who first asked: “What is in a name?” Well, the answer is nothing.
If you’re writing, then you need to make sure that the name is one that you can live with, because you’ll be spending Heaven knows how many hours working with that character and that name. If you just choose randomly that you don’t care for, you might grow to hate the name and, by association, the character. If you’re working with a protagonist that is supposed to be likable in some way, then you are failing as your personal feelings may find their way into your writing.
Other names just don’t fit the character. For example, if the character is larger than life, a lady’s man, witty, a real man’s man and an intergalactic hero, responsible for saving humanity from unspeakable evil and that man’s name is… Bob. Just Bob.
No, Bob is your coworker. It’s probably why one of the most badass characters in film, Snake Plissken, has only one mentioning of his real name in two films. It’s because his first name is Bob. Probably also why he goes by Snake.
If you hadn’t noticed, I put a lot of thought into naming my characters and it shows. I wrote a few hundred word short last September and two of the three comments mentioned how they liked the names I gave the characters.
I tend to choose names that apply, in some way, to the characters, and who I want those characters to be. Sometimes it is literal, other times it is ironic. But it is always something that I like and think works well for the characters. Take, for example, the names of the characters from the aforementioned story (I should also take this time to note that I’m using that 400 word story as an opening for a longer yarn).
The main character is Anshel. It is a Yiddish diminutive for Asher, meaning “happy” or “blessed” in Hebrew. For a man who, at the start, is very happy and feels blessed it fits rather well. It is also ironic as he spends a great deal of time feeling quite the opposite.
His best friend is Katsuo, which is a Japanese name meaning “victory” and “hero, manly.” I specifically searched for a Japanese name, as I wanted him to use Japanese weaponry, and show diversity amongst the characters in the two cities where the action takes place.
Anshel’s right hand is Eulalia, a Spanish/Ancient Greek/Italian/English (I forget where I was looking when I found the name) that means to “talk well.” Later in the story, she needs to use her ability to “speak well” to convince Anshel to act. It was also just a name I kind of liked and that worked for the character. That was also one of the hardest names to find for that story.
If you are curious, I use Behind the Name to search for names, usually by country/region, and to find the meanings.
However, I don’t use that site, alone. I also use names that I just like from other sources, as well.
The final character in that story was a cat named Alfador. That came from one of my favorite video games of all time: Chrono Trigger. One part of the game had a character (Janus) who had a cat named, you guessed it, Alfador. Because it is one of my favorite games (and a cool name) I took it and used it for myself.
I’ve also named at least two characters “Plissken” after our good friend, Snake, as well.
Motivation & The Dreaded Middle
This week we are taking a look at motivation and the dreaded middle section of a story. I find it ironic that this title is, relatively, the middle of this series. What’s up with the middle being a bad thing? Let’s take a look.
So far, we’ve covered getting those ideas firmed up and starting to write out shiny new wonderful story idea. This is always an exciting time – fresh new idea, exciting new plot, new characters, new conflict. The key word here is new. Once we get tot he middle, the idea is no longer new and fresh, we know the plot far better than we did at the start, the characters have been chattering in our heads so long now we sometimes tune them out like we do a buzzing fluorescent light, and we begin to wonder if there is enough conflict, or perhaps too much that we should just kill them all and be done with it. Welcome to the Sagging Middle!
So what do we do now? Well, first up, step away from the keyboard. Killing off all your characters will drastically change both your category, turning your novel into a novella (or short story), and likely your genre as well. So unless you intend to make it a horror story, a little perspective is needed. It’s likely not that bad, just that you’ve been sleeping, eating, and breathing this story for a while and need a break. It’s okay to take a day or two. Trust me, your characters won’t hate you and run off to another story. Well, I have one doing this but it is a horror story and he has evil intentions. You don’t have to worry about that.
Take a little time to catch your breath, get some perspective, then take a look at where you are. The middle can be a quagmire if you lose track of your story arc. The thing to do here is look back over what had happened so far. Is the story still on track? Does the conflict help develop the story and characters? If it’s a mystery or suspense, have you dropped enough clues so far that it still fits together? If not, perhaps one of your characters needs some fleshing out, perhaps something you think is clear to the reader but isn’t needs a little more illuminating.
Sometimes it all in how you look at it. Instead of seeing it as the boring middle part, think of it as the top of the hill. Your setting is fleshed out. Your characters are all set and doing their thing. The story is humming along. You get to the top of this hill and realize, you are halfway home. That’s great news! From here, you can look at your word count and see the ‘words left to write’ shrinking daily. Not only that, but this number is smaller than the number of words you’ve written! I don’t know about you, but that really gets me going. It’s like the end id actually in sight, though still somewhat distant, for the first time. You can see that this thing might actually come together.
This all ties directly into motivation. Writing can be a solitary endeavor, so much of our motivation comes from within. What excites us? What keeps us going for the long haul? Sometimes it’s nothing more than that I’ve covered above. A wonderful new idea that insists on being written. A character that just refuses to leave your head and won’t stop talking to you. A great plot idea. Those will usually get you started, but it’s often sheer determination that keeps you going even when things seem stalled. Keep your eye on the goal and you will get there. Even when things seem to be going awry, there’s something of value there, we just have to find it and push through. Before we know it, we are off and running once more.
As they used to say in the 70’s, Keep On Truckin’!
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Another Darla Dilemma – Wiley Wednesday
As a fledgling writer, I find myself with more questions than answers to share. I’ve decided that it’s not all bad if I can help someone else by bringing up the point, even if I have no resolution.
Today I’m curious about how many projects most writers have going at any one time. It’s entirely too tempting to love a story when it’s new and then let it flounder once the initial love affair has worn off.
In my heart of hearts I think it would be best to marry myself to one project and see it through to rough draft completion as opposed to playing the field. After all, it’s only fair to my characters, isn’t it?
What about you? How many incomplete stories do you have saved on your hard drive and, if you’re like me, even lying about in notebooks? Regardless, I wish you happy writing!
NaNoWriMo No Mo’
These first few days of December, I find myself reflecting fondly on National Novel Writing Month. I’d feared failing to write fifty thousand words of one story for NaNoWriMo and instead find myself missing the challenge.
In fact, there has been nothing new to come from my imagination since the final day and I’m trying to not let that bother me. I think other factors of life are playing a role, but I’m still hoping each day for that writing bug to bite me again.
As for the story that came from that endeavor, I recall the advice given me by Josh Lanyon, author of the popular Adrien English mystery series. The first thing to do with a new rough draft is nothing – set it aside for at least a few weeks. We shall see if I have a diamond in the rough from that endeavor. In the meantime, I must cultivate patience with my muse. Hopefully, the dam will soon break and fresh storytelling will burst forth.
I hope you’re enjoying your own creative efforts, wherever they may lead.
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Wiley Wednesday: Completeing A Draft & Scheduling
Last post I discussed beginning a new story, how to begin, and what tools we use. I mentioned a often-used acronym, BICHOK. Butt in chair, hands on keys. Here’s where that little mantra really becomes important. Learn it, know it, use it.
First step. How long will it be? Is it a short story? Novella? Full-length novel? The difference is the length, but the process is the same. At this point, you have made this decision and written your outline (or not). Everything’s ready, it’s time to get the words on the page. This means two things: goals and sticking to them. That’s how a draft gets done. So how do goals work where a first draft is concerned? It’s time to do a little math. (I can hear you all groaning now!)
The first step, once you have decided what the overall length will be, is to decide how long you want to take to write it. When do you want to add The End to your draft? Obviously, if you are submitting for a specific publisher’s call, you will have a deadline date to shoot for. If not, then it’s more a matter of personal choice, and your comfort level regarding speed and amount of work per day. Once you have your own ‘deadline’ decided, there’s where the math comes in. Figure out the number of days till you want it done, divide your total projected word count by that number of days, and there you have it. This depends, also, on how many days a week you plan to write. Do you take weekends off? Are Mondays the pits for you? Are you out of town every Thursday? Adjust your number of writing days accordingly and you’ll have a concrete number of words you need to write each writing day to reach your daily and total goals. And you thought this would be hard.
Actually, the math is the easy part. Now comes the real work. The writing. Reaching those goals.
I got a real ‘out of the frying pan and into the fire’ experience with my first NaNoWriMo. that stands for National Novel Writing Month, and it takes place every November. The basic idea is to write a 50,000 word novel in one month. A friend of mine had mentioned it to me years ago, and I finally decided to give it a shot. 50,000 words, 30 days. Approximately 1666 words every day. Sound insane? Yes, it is. It was also one of the most exhilarating and fun things I have ever done. I met with a local group of fellow insane writers and we all went at it. And I did it. All because I kept an eye on my goals constantly.
I knew the total daily breakdown/minimum I had to do. That gave me a weekly number, and a running total as I went. I made desktop wallpaper that had a calendar with my daily word count on it. I crossed off each day as I went. The sense of accomplishment was huge, and that visual prodding and feeling of success is what kept me going. This is the key. Find a system that works for you, that will inspire you, push you when you need it, and keep your goals in front of you. Have some sort of tracking system, a visual so you can see that you are being successful. And every day that you accomplish your number will make you feel that much more successful and determined to keep it going.
That’s the real secret right there to getting that first draft written. Make a plan, stick to it, and track it. Congratulate yourself on your successes along the way. And before long? You too will be typing THE END.
Happy writing!
Starting a New Story
So, we’ve got all these wonderful characters talking in our heads, a fabulous plot, a gorgeous setting. We may or may not have an outline, depending on whether we like that sort of thing or prefer to wing it. Now it’s time to sit down and start banging out the words, right? Absolutely! We sit down, open our word processor of choice and there it is….the blank page and the blinking cursor. Blinking at us.
Non-stop.
What now?
Starting on the shiny new story is always exciting and often comes with no small amount of trepidation. Will it be any good? Will I come up with the right words? Do I have enough plot to make a whole novella/novel out of it? I love the start of a new story. By the time I sit down to actually start writing, I’ve usually had these characters talking to me for a while and know them as well as I know the people who live in my house. They are getting pretty bossy by this time and insisting I get going. Since I am a panster, I don’t write outlines and timelines and such before I start. I do, however, have a general idea of the plot arc and know the main events that will get us from beginning to end. How I get to these points of interest along the way is always a surprise and there lies the real excitement for me in a new story. I can’t wait to see what surprises the characters will spring on me, what secrets they will reveal, what action develops, how the relationships among them evolve.
But that all happens once I have actually started writing. How do I actually get started? Here’s a little bird’s eye view of (cue dramatic music) THE BEGINNING.
If you’ve read my earlier posts, prior to this series, you will have seen one about my schedule change to being an early riser so I can get my writing in before the kids get up. If you haven’t, now you know, so the scene is set. My alarm invades my sleep just before 6 AM. There is always an momentary wish to sleep in, which gets tossed out, then I climb out of bed. I get dressed and head to the kitchen. Today is easier since I am finally going to start on that new story idea that has been bugging me mercilessly for weeks. That’s pretty exciting and once I have coffee (or hot tea) in hand, it’s off to the computer.
So now we are there with the blank page and cursor. What happens now? There’s a popular acronym in the writing world: BICHOK, i.e. butt in chair, hands on keys. I start writing. Whatever comes to mind. This may stay, or may get edited out later but the important and essential first step is to get the writing flowing, prime the pump. Chances are that I will eventually come back here to polish up this beginning, make it stronger, more enticing, but for now, the main thing is to get started. And keep going. Not everything you toss into this first draft will stay, but it is essential to get the thoughts moving, get the words on the page and don’t worry about perfection at this point. Once you get the draft done, then you can start to edit and polish, since you will have the whole plot arc done to reference when ‘fixing up’.
And whether you use extensive outlines, note cards, storyboards, novel writing programs, or go simple with just a word processor of one variety or another, or paper and pen, the important thing is this: start writing. Keep writing. Don’t look back. Stay consistent, and the story will flow. Keep at it till done. The formula is pretty simple, but what it can do it absolute magic.
Thursday Thirteen
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