“In Your Eyes” by Adelle Laudan

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Here’s a description of “In Your Eyes” from Amazon: Lizzy would give it all back just to hear her mother’s voice one more time… the house, the furniture…even the money. Regardless, her heartless stepfather is determined to take what he feels is rightfully his. Handyman Adam Woodward rides into Lizzy’s life and vows to keep her safe, but is it enough to stop the cold, callous determination of Ben Stokes?

Adelle Laudan instantly pulled this reader into her story of innocence endangered. Ms. Laudan’s unique style lets you see through the characters’ eyes while showing them from the outside at the same time. There is never any doubt as to whom you’re seeing among the story’s distinct personalities. I rooted from page one for the sweet heroine. Introduction to her secret admirer gave immediate hope for a happily-ever-after.

Honestly, picking up the title after breakfast one lazy weekend morning, I didn’t put it down until finished! It’s the perfect length for an afternoon beach read or guilty escapism from chores. While you should know not to expect steamy smut, pick up “In Your Eyes” for a taste of tender romance. You won’t regret it.

Wiley Wednesday

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The more I get into writing, the more I find my skill lacking. It’s ironic considering I agreed to write something meant to help others. Then again, perhaps part of being human is learning together.

All I really feel qualified to say today is that if you want to write, don’t stop doing it. And whatever you do, write what you love.

This is echoed at the end of an article by Josh Lanyon that I find worthy of sharing. It’s regarding m/m writing and whether such authors should try to find a mainstream publisher. That said, the website does showcase gay male sexuality, so please be warned.

If you don’t mind some male nudity and are inclined to read Mr. Lanyon’s enlightening opinion, please click here: 

Reviews by Jesse Wave

Dead Battery

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Sitting in a rainstorm with a dead car battery, I can’t help comparing this situation to my writing. For various reasons, work stress among them, I feel too drained by day’s end to write. It’s like my characters have abandoned me.

However, I’m not calling it quits. I knew what number to call for help today, so there is surely some key to storytelling locked inside me. First, I need to sit down and make the effort to write whether I feel like it or not. Taking that step is one hundred percent more likely to produce words on the page than not trying.

Perhaps I’ll start now while waiting for my savior with the jumper cables.

Then again, I have my “Artist’s Way” book by Julian Cameron. It’s designed to enable higher creativity without forcing oneself.

Rather than speaking of a drained battery, Ms. Cameron would probably tell me that I need to fill my creative well. There are many fun ways to do that. This week five of “The Artist’s Way” advises collecting images of postponed pleasures and desires. I think it’s time to go through a gardening catalog. Then I can head over to a garden center when the weather warms and put my artist’s eye toward shaping my yard into some fresh new visualization.

Weekly artist’s dates, times spent all by myself doing something fun, are another big tool from Julia Cameron’s arsenal. The visit to said garden center would make a great date even before time to plant.

What about you? Is it time to charge that battery or fill your well? What interesting venture might aid you in the goal?

Essential Ingredients

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I had an irresistible urge to re-read The School of Essential Ingedients by Erica Bauermeister today. The story follows several characters who take a cooking class in vivid detail. While each individual character’s story is perhaps too short to be truly satisfying, I can’t help but sink into the world that Bauermeister creates. Every page is a feast for the senses – tastes and sounds and smells and touches so clearly drawn that you cannot help but feel like you’re in the same room as the characters.

Now, I love food. I’m not always very adventurous in terms of what I actually eat, but there is almost nothing I enjoy more than sitting around a table with friends and family and diving into a really great meal, from appetizers through dessert. So of course I love a book that’s all about the ways food can evoke and create memories and really shape our lives.
What drew me to The School of Essential Ingredients today, though, was not so much the food, but the author’s ability to make me taste it and feel it. The language isn’t especially complex, the word choices are plain language rather than literary extravaganzas mined from a thesaurus. But each sentence is carefully crafted and fitted to its place in the story.
Sometimes I need to remember that. That it’s not always about word count or productivity, but about the craft itself, about making the words on the page really count.