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The Night Is a Harsh Mistress, Chapter 18: In the Belly of the Beast

Writer Zen Garden Posted on September 6, 2010 by a.catherine.noonSeptember 6, 2010

Aleksandr Chernoff just smiled. “If you’ll come this way, Miss Carmichael? I’ve taken the liberty of having a light meal prepared. I understand you had to eat in a McDonalds.” He said the restaurant name with a faint sneer, as though he disapproved of such a pedestrian choice.

Or maybe he just didn’t care for the food…

Her mother’s family always ate when guests came over, so maybe she was just being judgmental. Her mother liked to act American, but Nana kept to the customs of Vorobyovy Gory back home. ‘Zakuski,’ or snacks, accompanied the ever-present vodka and mixers. Her uncle Vanya, whom the family teased because of the play by that name, usually ate his share and a share of everyone else’s, causing her mother distress because she had to cook whenever he just dropped by for a visit.

It didn’t appear that Aleksandr suffered any such difficulties. The room just off the entryway spread along the front of the house, easily thirty feet long. Three separate conversation circles grouped in discrete sections split the room up, but could easily be reconfigured if necessary. Fifteen feet wide and carpeted in a rich chocolate with flecks of caramel, the room’s walls exuded wealth. Heavy carved wooden pillars lined the wall at eight foot intervals, and the area between them sported a rich ivory paint. Wall sconces perfectly centered between each one sparked the way only fine crystal could, and she shuddered to think of how much work went into dusting and polishing them.

A heavy claw-footed buffet stood along the wall to the left of the nearest circle. A silver ewer of tea held court over several plates of puff-pastry and single servings of salad.

Of course, the minute the aroma hit her nose, her mouth watered…

“Please, help yourself,” Aleksandr invited. He stepped ahead of her to pour tea and she lifted a plate.

Bone china, from the feel of it.

She wanted to cry.

She glared at Viktor, but he smirked faintly and got a plate. He said nothing, just waited for her to select some snacks.

If one could call such fare ‘snacks,’ of course.

The pastries still exuded steam and she selected one of each. The last had sugar sprinkled on top, so she set it to the corner of her plate for dessert. A table and three heavy chairs stood next to a huge picture window that overlooked a lush flower garden. She sat down and glimpsed a shadowy figure of a guard, pacing by outside. She shivered.

“Viktor tells me you are quite an investigator,” Aleksandr said by way of introduction. He set three glasses of tea down, one for each of them, and Viktor set a plate of pastries and a salad by his father’s chair. “I’m quite impressed.”

“Thank you,” she responded. “He’s told me little of you.”

The most powerful mob boss in the world gazed at her and then laughed, but a shiver went up her spine. It would not do to push this man too far, she guessed.

“I don’t doubt that,” Aleksandr purred. “But come. Tell me of my son.”

“Your son, sir?” Rachel echoed, glancing at Viktor. “Um…”

“No, of Vasily.”

“She doesn’t know, Father,” Viktor put in.

Aleksandr studied his son. “You keep many secrets, Viktor. Not all of them are necessary.”

“Perhaps,” Viktor grunted. “But until recently, I didn’t think she’d actually find him. They found her, which surprised me.”

“Indeed. How, I wonder?”

“Who?” Rachel demanded. “And who the heck is Vasily?”

“You know him as David Greene,” Viktor told her evenly, with no inflection.

She went cold from the chest out. “David Greene.”

“Yes.”

“Son of Constance and Doug Greene?”

“Yes.”

She sat back, chilled from head to foot. “Viktor, you never said that he was related to you!”

“I didn’t feel it would help the situation.”

“And now?”

“Now, I do.”

“So you drag me into the middle of your family drama?” she shouted.

Viktor just studied her, that remote stare he sometimes got that made her want to scratch his eyes out. Then she got a thought. “Doesn’t that make David your brother?”

“His name is Vasily.”

She ground her jaws together, trying not to shout at him again. “Vasily. Vasily is your brother?”

“Yes.”

Aleksandr chuckled and said, in Russian, “You are being purposely frustrating.”

“Yes, he is,” Rachel answered in the same language.

Aleksandr’s eyebrow shot up and he studied her. “You are full of surprises, Miss Carmichael.”

“Help me understand. Your son is missing, and you want me to help find him?”

“No, Miss Carmichael. I have other men looking into that. But the two who pose as his parents are a danger to you.”

“Why me?”

“They think you are connected to me.”

“Which now, I am!” she cried, glaring at Viktor.

“They already suspected it, Raych,” Viktor said in a placating tone. “This was the best protection I could think of at the spur of the moment. You already know they play for keeps.”

She frowned, flashing on her date. “Yeah.”

“How did they come to hire you?” Aleksandr pressed.

“I don’t know, honestly,” she admitted. “I hadn’t really thought about it at the time.”

He studied her, his dark brown eyes compassionate. “Perhaps you will now start doing so when new clients approach you?”

Her lips thinned. “Yes.”

He just smiled, that faint smile that reminded her of Nana, in this enormous house with its beautiful bone china and wood fixtures.

“Do you play cards, Miss Carmichael?” Aleksandr asked then.

“Yes, of course,” she answered before she thought. Then she frowned. “Why?”

Aleksandr motioned to the silent hulk at the doorway and the man stepped out, then returned with a wooden lacquer box.

Of cards.

Rachel dearly wanted to pump them both for information, but separately. As it was, she couldn’t think of a single useful thing to say, and so spent an hour playing whist.

By the time Aleksandr excused himself to sleep, she felt so turned around it seemed like a dream. And when the silent guard showed her the room she could use for the night, Viktor, predictably, disappeared.

Men!

Posted in Uncategorized | Tagged A. Catherine Noon, Serial Fiction, The Night Is a Harsh Mistress

So it’s Saturday… let’s see what I can do

Writer Zen Garden Posted on September 4, 2010 by a.catherine.noonSeptember 4, 2010

Ok, so it’s been a while… and I still have very little I can think of to say.

Random thoughts:

-I’m going to a wedding on Sunday… not really a fan. The ceremony itself is always fine, but the reception kills me. The food is good, but I’m not going to drink (will probably be driving, among other reasons) and the loud music I don’t care about, dancing that I don’t like to do and a bunch of people that I don’t know and won’t talk to. She’s a pretty good friend, so I’m not going to miss it, but I’m glad I have a reason to leave early.

-I go back to school Monday… it’s going to be my final year, which means that in around a year I should be “in the real world” and I’m freaking terrified.

-I also have duties to fulfill as the Fencing Club president, some of which I’ll be missing because of the wedding, much to my chagrin. But, what can you do?

-I’m still trying to figure out if delegating many responsibilities that I feel I should be doing makes me a good president or a bad one.

-I’m not looking forward to classes, only because my schedule means that I have one class on Tuesday, Thursday and Friday, but have a lot of classes (10-7, with only one break) on Monday and Wednesday. Still not sure how to feel about it.

-I like grapes.

-I need to do some more writing. I have several stories running around in the old noodle, but haven’t been able to get myself to sit down and write them, yet.

And that’s all I have to say about that.

Posted in Uncategorized | Tagged Lucius Antony

Thursday Thirteen

Writer Zen Garden Posted on September 2, 2010 by a.catherine.noonSeptember 2, 2010

We have very different and fun lists for you today. Come check them out!

A. Catherine Noon

Darla’s Sand Castles

Nicole Gordon

Posted in Uncategorized | Tagged A. Catherine Noon, Darla, Nicole, Thursday Thirteen

Wiley Wednesday: Irreducible Minimums

Writer Zen Garden Posted on September 1, 2010 by a.catherine.noonSeptember 1, 2010

There’s an idea in piano instruction called the Irreducible Minimums. It’s the idea that there are certain things that one must do on a regular basis, those “at least” things that keep us with one foot in the water.

As it relates to writing, there are certain things that we must do on a regular basis to keep the pump primed and the ideas flowing. But for each writer, those things are different.

Here, then, is the List According to Noony (which is the only right list, you know…)

1. Morning Pages

Those of you who have been readers of mine for a while have heard me harp on this subject quite a bit. It bears repeating: Morning Pages work. They work because they keep the channel clear. They are the small step that leads to bigger steps.

In case you haven’t been reading my material (and if not, you should feel very guilty and go fix that right now by reading everything) (from the beginning) (and making comments on each thing) what are Morning Pages? They are an idea from the genius mind of Julia Cameron, author of The Artist’s Way and other books, and are three pages of longhand writing, done in the morning. They are hardest for writers, because our temptation is to write them. They aren’t meant to be fine prose, or even grammatically correct. In fact, one way to really get a lot out of them is to try to write them badly. Write them from the perspective of a child throwing a tantrum. Write them however you write them, but write them. Three pages of them. Every morning.

2. Regular Sleep

This may sound like a “duh” moment, but it amazes me how many people I know who don’t let themselves get enough sleep. They try to burn the candle at both ends and wonder why they’ve run out of wax. Stupid. Sleep is necessary for mammals. (In case you haven’t been paying attention, if you’re reading this, you’re a mammal.)

3. Support

This may sound foo-foo, but it’s critical. Studies have shown that people with extended networks of family and friends do better on all sorts of measurements from tests to longevity. Writing is a solitary activity, since it comes down to us with a pen or keyboard. But you do not need to be solitary to pursue it. There are all kinds of writing groups, online support, and other resources you can use to meet this basic human need.

4. Practice

In order to keep it going, and get better, storytellers need to practice. Experiment with new techniques, write to writing prompts, and keep your hand in. Blogs are a good way to keep it flowing and to get support, all at the same time.

5. Write

It may seem simplistic, but in order to keep writing, one must… write. It’s not hard.

Of course, it ain’t easy, either…

What are your irreducible minimums?

Posted in Uncategorized | Tagged A. Catherine Noon, Reference, Reflections, Wiley Wednesday, Writing

Keeping It Real

Writer Zen Garden Posted on August 28, 2010 by a.catherine.noonAugust 28, 2010

Description can be both bane and boon to our writing.  It can make the setting and action seem real, pull in  the readers and put them front and center, make them a real part of your story.  Even so, too much, can be as bad as not enough.  It needs a happy medium – enough for realism without overdoing. But how do we get there?


My senior year in high school, we were discussing this very thing. It often comes down to details. As the old saying goes, the devil is in the details.  Our teacher assigned a paper, one page only, to demonstrate this point. And while it was a paper giving directions, it applies to description very well, since you have to describe what to do.  The subject?  How to tie a shoe.  She wanted us to describe the process so that someone reading the essay could do exactly what was written and accomplish it.

The next day, she collected all the papers, shuffled them, and handed them out again, giving everyone an essay they didn’t write and had us follow it.  Some were easily done, others quite humorous. It drove the point home, however, to focus on the important details, in a limited space, to get the job done.

And while tying shoes may not be overly useful, try it with an apple. Spend a full minute looking at one, noting all the details. Then hide the apple and write your description. Once you are done, compare.  Sis you miss anything?  Does your description  seem as rich as the real thing? If not, you can add to it.  The idea is to make it as real as possible. Your readers may not see your particular apple in real life, but you can certainly make them see it in their minds, make them feel it and smell it, taste it. And that is what it’s all about.

Posted in Uncategorized | Tagged P.M. Rousseau, Writing

Thursday Thirteen

Writer Zen Garden Posted on August 26, 2010 by a.catherine.noonAugust 26, 2010

Join us for random lists to celebrate Thursday! We love comments, if you have the time…

Darla M Sands

Posted in Uncategorized | Tagged Darla, Thursday Thirteen

Starving Artist

Writer Zen Garden Posted on August 17, 2010 by a.catherine.noonAugust 17, 2010

I was at a restaurant the other day with my partner when the wait turned into a longer ordeal than anticipated. I was not really surprised, as it was a new place. My first instinct happened to be leaving, too, but I didn’t want to be a spoilsport.

So we waited. We waited for a table, we waited for service, then we waited a ridiculous amount of time for mediocre food. Somewhere during the period between sitting down and getting served, I was asked why I wasn’t writing. There is always some sort of writing material on my person, even if it’s a cheap pen and a scrap of paper. I don’t feel right without it.

But do you know why I wasn’t writing? Because I was hungry. The old belly grumbled way too determinedly for me to focus on any kind of storytelling.

I thought that was a funny sort of blessing. Of all the big issues that plague countless poor, blocked artists, my issue happens to have been a very brief one with biology.

So, what stops you from writing or drawing or whatever it is that makes you feel personally productive? I doubt it’s your appetite for protein and carbohydrates. Do you suffer guilt over other things you think you “should” be doing? I say, go feed that creative hunger! Stop being a starving artist. Your whole being will thank you.

Posted in Uncategorized | Tagged Darla, Motivation, Reflections

A Solitary Occupation?

Writer Zen Garden Posted on August 14, 2010 by a.catherine.noonAugust 14, 2010

We’ve all seen it in the movies and read it in books: the time-worn image of a writer sitting down to his typewriter (or computer these days) to write a book.  The author is always alone, in a nifty little office with an old fashioned desk, a shelf full of books, a few quaint decorations, and a window with a lovely view. The setting outside the window varies, but the one thing always there is the idea of writing alone. How true is it?

My best answer is it is and it isn’t. Writing, for the most part, can be a very solitary profession.  There is no substitute for physically sitting down, on your own, and getting the words on the page via whatever medium you use, be it typewriter, computer, or pen and paper. A s such,  no one can bring to life the stories in your head besides you. Time to focus, without distractions, is a must and this is best done alone. When we really get into the writing groove, when the words are flowing and the story is good, the characters alive, the least interruption, one phone call, can totally derail you. We need time with the people in our heads here, perhaps not the people in real life.

 But what about the other times? What about  the night last week when you had a sticky plot point and could have used some advice? What if you just received a revise & resubmit request and need an opinion on the notes? What if you need technical information on how to saddle a horse or make nitroglycerin (for example)? There is always  the internet for research but for other things — advice, sympathy, a pat on the back, or someone to cheer with — you need other writers.

There is no substitute for having author friends to commiserate with you over a rejection, or look over your chapters to see what’s going awry, to cheer with you over your latest sale, or even talk shop with over your process. Some of us are lucky to have people locally for this whether it’s local writing groups or local chapters of national writing organizations.  Whether you have writers at hand or don’t, there is always the internet. Writing groups flourish online.  Forums, writing blogs, online chapters of organizations, the list is endless. Add in smaller crit groups that form among the patrons of these online groups and you can spend 24 hours a day socializing. It’s a wealth of knowledge, help, and much needed socialization with people who understand what it means to have imaginary people talking in your head.

 So back to my original question. Solitary or not? I can honestly say that I think this writing gig is the best of both worlds. Now I am back to my desk, and my window with the gorgeous view of the Montana mountains.

Posted in Uncategorized | Tagged P.M. Rousseau, Reflections, Writing

Thursday Thirteen

Writer Zen Garden Posted on August 12, 2010 by a.catherine.noonAugust 12, 2010

Today is the day for random lists. Please stop by and comment if you enjoyed:

A. Catherine Noon

Darla M. Sands

Posted in Uncategorized | Tagged Darla, Thursday Thirteen

The Lady with Dust Bunnies in Her Hair

Writer Zen Garden Posted on August 11, 2010 by a.catherine.noonAugust 11, 2010

The gal in question wrote to an animal welfare website where folks tell how they discovered a beloved pet, often found languishing in a shelter after being heartlessly dumped. Her story stood out, though. This goodhearted person wrote that the poor cat spent his initial two months “with me hiding under the bed.” What? An adult woman spent two months under her bed?

It’s a sad tell on misuse of the English language that it took me a few moments to realize that the cat hid, not the woman. Should I expect a preposition to precede the subject of a verb? Of course not. Yet that was exactly how I interpreted her opening sentence. Why did she even add the words “with me”? Where else would the animal have been, an ocean freighter?

After reading the sentence, I find myself particularly grateful for demanding school teachers. I also have a constructively perfectionist mother who instilled a strong respect for precise grammar and punctuation. I’m far from perfect, to be sure, but my problem is more along the lines of capitol versus capital and the like. All the same, I think it’s time to pick up an edition of “Eats, Shoots & Leaves” by Lynn Truss. If nothing else, the intrinsic humor and a foreword by delightful author Frank McCourt will make the informative read well worth the time and money.

Instead of worrying about perfection, however, I’d definitely rather read these types of heartwarming stories. And that goes for fiction, too, so happy writing!

Posted in Uncategorized | Tagged Darla, Wiley Wednesday

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