Haiku

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I’ve tried my hand at some Haiku. It’s here for your enjoyment.

Love ~ Eaton.

engulfing sadness

unshed tears burning like fire

punishment complete

secret obsession

stars unfolding mysteries

Illumination

clouds, swirling turmoil

dangerously raging storm

seeking sweet solace

Evey Brown on October 22, 2008 at 03:19 said:

You know how much I love these Eaton.
I find it interesting just how differently we can all interpret the same set of words. LOL
Keep going with that poetry, chook! ~huggles~ E
A. Catherine Noon on October 22, 2008 at 04:02 said:

Hi, Eaton! It amazes me how many different, creative and lyrical ways you can tell stories. I do believe that\’s what you are doing in your poetry, telling stories and painting word pictures. I think you do it exceedingly well and I know that one day soon I\’ll see your material in print. You are awesome!
Eaton Bennett on October 22, 2008 at 04:56 said:

Thanks E, and noony…you both make my heart sing. <3 🙂
Dawn on October 22, 2008 at 07:34 said:

you amaze me Eaton. My hats off to you, you truely have a gift.
Gwen Mitchell on October 24, 2008 at 20:37 said:

I agree. You continue to baffle me with your poetic brilliance! Go you!
Eaton Bennett on October 28, 2008 at 12:09 said:

Gwenn, nobody is more surprised than me. 🙂 🙂

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