I kissed him, lightly but with a shudder of fervour across my spine, as if I had wings that were trying to unfurl.
This could easily continue as a review of the book. Instead, I want to share what this line inspires in me as a writer.
Adoring the idea of romantic relationships between men, I try to offer that feeling through my storytelling. Yet, in retrospect of reading Ms. Fox’s line, perhaps my methods are too clinical. Now I feel challenged to experiment with more emotive descriptions, even sprinkling in a line or two that some might consider flowery.
After all, a guy should be allowed to think in a baroque way once in a while, even if he’d feel cheesy expressing the words. Wish me luck in convincing “my” men.
Please check out Amazon’s Harper Fox Page And happy writing!