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  1. I love the name of your heroine, and I believe I\’ve read this story before haven\’t I? Did I help beta it?
    Love the line where she says take me to bed, and let\’s while away a few hours. Sweet and romantic.
    A very nice piece. ~hugs E

  2. Wow. This is a great piece, Byz. I love all the emotions you evoked with such depth. You really captured many of the feelings of a soldier upon returning home – and those of his love. The connection between them was storybook – not in a cheesy way at all. And I love his conviction at the end. Very well done!