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  1. I love this story Dawn! The idea of the pair going through time, seeing those amazing things, they certainly must have forged a deep bond. *wink*.
    Especially liked the way they held eye contact until she was gone, they really do depend on each other.

  2. Dawn you have a style of writing that I enjoy very much. Your characters and plots blend beautifully. I always want more of the story and more of your people.
    I hope you expand this one more in the un-wind prompt coming up.

  3. I really enjoy what you\’ve done with this so far and hope you come up with more.

    I particularly like these lines:
    \”The only thing troubling her was the fact that she\’d be alone. Alone in a way she\’d never been alone before. The only person in the world not from that time.\”

    Two sentences that put everything in a grand perspective. That. Is. Literally. Alone.

    Great job hun! *hugs* ~Gwen