Season Haiku Set
I had a go at the three line, 17 syllables or less sort of haiku and came up with this
Spring lives
In the blossom on my tree
In the yellow daffodils
Summer dances
In the roses
In the warmth of the sun
Autumn rages
With vibrant leaves
Against the dying light
Winter sleeps
In the stark grey
Under a cold blanket of snow
The seasons change
Have to
What else can they do?
I love the beauty,
Simplicity of haiku;
Words become magic.
This is beautiful! I love the ending, too. Very simple and clear. Brava!
Wow. I\’m impressed and it\’s hard to impress me with ANY kind of poeticness. If that\’s a word. Poetry usually ties my brain in knots, but I liked what you did here. I could see it, understand it, feel it. And that\’s what counts.
Brava.
I like all of these! Excellent job, Fey!! *hugs*