4 thoughts on “1.00am

  1. The hair is standing up on my arms as I read and read again. Wow! Said aloud, the phrases resonate like prayer.

  2. Sometimes when I start a piece of poetry I'm not sure where it's going, a few words come and I follow their trail to the finale. This is one of those. Than you, Darla. 🙂

  3. You're most welcome, Eaton, and thank you for sharing insight into your process. I must say that my short stories usually emerge with no foreseen conclusion. It's fun to see where our fancies take us!

  4. Byz. says:

    I was surprised when the final lines were out. I was not expecting the intensity I felt at the direction this piece had taken. 🙂

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