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The Night Is A Harsh Mistress, Chapter 5, by A. Catherine Noon — No Comments

  1. Wonderful use of adjectives in this chapter. You painted such clear pictures I could have been watching a movie. Loved iit, Noony!! 🙂

  2. Loved the part where Rachel wishes she\’d asked for a cigarette and sniffs the air deeply, trying to inhale some of the scent his left behind.
    It was a nice, subtle touch of comic relief in all the building tension.

  3. kinda glad that I have started this later so I didn't need to wait after that last cliffie. You have a great touch for building the suspense. I agree with Evey about her sniffing the second hand smoke a funny touch.