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  1. Wow! What an elegant vision! I like how romantic and yet sleepy it is, such comfort and sense of place. Thank you for sharing this, particularly in the midst of all your family fun. Drive safe and have a great time in Adelaide!

  2. I am sort of wishing i were in the land of the butterfly right now but then to each is given a season.

    I liked what my eyes felt as they read this one Eaton.

  3. Beautiful, simply beautiful imagery. The thunder in the background and the breeze that push the butterfly off its course made me think of how easily the good things in our lives can be scattered and lost if we let them.
    You should be proud, Eaton. 🙂

  4. The contrast between the breeze and the butterfly outside and the peaceful stillness inside is well done. The reader definitely sinks into the moment with your narrator. Nice job, Eaton!

  5. Thank you everyone! Makes me really happy and encouraged to know that you all got something special from this piece. It is without a doubt one of my favorites.